Haha, original
I have never seen something like this before, I really laughed when it showed a close up of the robot/machine thing.
I do think that the benny hill song is overused though so maybe you could of chosen something newer.
I think if you did a bit more shading also, that would boost its score like in the first scene were it shows the house for like 5 seconds a bit of shading would improve its quality and instead of having just plain lime green grass you could of added a bit of texture to it.
Anyway I really like your style of doing this and it was hilarious. Best of luck to you in the future and I hope to see more flash from you soon : )