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[BVC]

Sweet ^_^

I really liked this, there was amazing artowrk and detail in the backgrounds which really impressed me, the music suited it PERFECTLY and it really enhanced the tone of your flash.

The fight scenes were alright, and I specificly liked it when the guy through the knife into the other guys head. (if you understand what I'm talking about).

Anyway overall I enjoyed this and I'll be sure to review your sequel whenever you finish it. 4/5.

willdot responds:

Thanks, knifes in heads are always a laugh!

[RC: Clockmas]

Best yet.

Loved the intro. Like the 2oth century fox thing. =)
The shading looked really nifty and I liked the detail you put in the background buildings and just those little things that make this great.

The narrator kinda bored me thouh since I could only understand half of what he was saying. Please add subtitles next time.

Anyway the parts I did understand were pretty funny and overall this is my favourite from you so far. 4/5

RiotGearClock responds:

Glad to hear it. I had to rush at the end to get it in on time. (I really need to work on time management. lol) Anywho, thanks for the review.

[RC: Big Brother]

Your submissions kick ass!

This had a weird feeling to it hard to describe but you really made the locked in, brainwashing, insane, kind of feeling, and it worked well.

The sound was perfect. It really set the tone immediately and I loved the "Sit Down And Shut Up" signs.

However I'm a little confused, but still great work again. =)

RiotGearClock responds:

Its based off apple's 1984 commercial which is (in some way) based off George Orwell's book 1984. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Problem with the tank]

Hehe good stuff

This was more of a stupid funny but I really enjoyed this.

One thing:
When I was reading the opening/intro those two white lines that were moving to make the flash seem old and historical also distracted me a bit, making it much harder to read.

That's about it good work on this.

RiotGearClock responds:

Back when I made this it was kinda just my attempt to get something on the portal. lol

[Super Mario Problem]

It's alright.

I think a little more detail would benefit you greatly, yanno like some of that frilly carp.
It was a little boring just watching bowser just stand there as the text did the talking so maybe some different poses would create more interest.

The Numa Numa was pretty good, I cracked a smile but didn't find it hilarious since t's overused but I liked is anyway.

Best of luck to you, keep improving and I'll be sure to review your sequel. 2/5. =)

In-Style-Always responds:

well at least you made a good and helpful review. well i like the numa numa song (but i might not use it in the sequel). i look foreward to your review man.

[C-19 Part1]

Couldn't understand the storyline

Not really impressed but it did look good.

The background was nice and detailed and the soundtrack really set the tone well and enhanced the feeling.

Needs subtitles. I might as well of turned off my speakers because I had no clue what was being said, those clock voices all sound the same to me. So it was difficult for me to become interested because everything was confusing.

Overall if I was able to understand you would have gotten a much higher score so I think subtitles are the best way to go but that's your choice.

RiotGearClock responds:

Wow, shocked this is still getting reviews. Anyways, the comment about subtitles has been noted and they have been included in all my newer movies. This one was done back in April which is part of the reason for the lack of quality. Thanks for your time, comrade.

[-Jestar's D-DAY SKATE 2-]

Awesomely awesome

Really great, the music was very suitinmg and enhanced your flash's effect.

Incredible attention to detail, had everything shading, intro to characters and what most impressed me was when "Tommy" jumped the stairs his hair hanged in the air for half a second but it was so realistc!

I think this should be longer and have a very creative finale, like maybe he ollies off the roof of a building and falls like 20 feet and makes a big splash into a lake.?

Anyway overall this is much better then the first and I really liked this. =)

Jestar responds:

Thanks for the feedback.
This took alot of work and I'm glad you liked it.
I didn't want to make the tricks too flashy because these are real kids. And the real kids can barely do what I animated =] To be honest, I don't think any of them can do what they were portrayed as being able to do.
BUT.
Thanks for the review.
~Jestar

[- Jestar's D-DAY SKATE -]

Real good

Very smooth movement and very life-like sounds.

This was very realistic and I would rather see something actually possible then like 50 backflips or something.
Great detail, the way the legs bended or just how the stick guy turned was so accurate.

I think it would be cool if there was a shadow just to give it the added touch but it's just a thoght.
Anyway great work on this it was easily enjoyable. =)

Jestar responds:

This is old. But thanks anyways =]
~Jestar

[The_Spirit_of The Samurai]

I didn't like it

It seemed cool with nice sharp sounds and a split second flash showing the audience what was happening but that's not enough.

The filesize was great but now I can understand why, it was way too short. But even if you did make it longer,if it was still just a flashing image every 5 or so seconds it would be too repetitive. It's not very easy to make this better.

To be blunt, this is your worst flash in my opinion. Perhaps it was your first but your other animations are much, much better. 2/5

Sk8erGirl14 responds:

I dont like it much either, I am debating whether or not to have it removed, but it is in the Samurai/Ninja section of NG so IDK...it's more of a mood setter for me, I didn't mean to dazzle anyone with it...

thanks for the review...