Not bad
Great drawings and the same for the shading they were both done very well!, they really impressed me and I like the sytle you used like all poetic and deep.
The soundtrack set the tone right away and suited this flash perfectly.
Overall it was a good flash and I liked it, good work. =)
thankies, i think this one is my favorite of the four i have on newgrounds :) *bows*
Oh man that was weird
I think this was my favourite so far, I don't know why but I just had the urge to keep watching.
The vineyard part was very unique I don't think i've seen anything like that before, although I rarely watch claymations that part just "wowed" me.
The view from the paper airplane was really creative and interesting, that part especially went well with the music it reminded me of some old video game from the 90's for some reason but I just found that part cool.
The whole adventure of the blue ball was interesting as it travels across the world (~room~), running from vines, snakes and a big white glove.
Or atleast that's what I thought it was about. Anyway great job on your claymations and I hope you continue to make more, best of luck. 4/5
This was my favorite too, Im really glad you liked it.
Yes I will be making more as soon as I get some spare time.
Thanks again!
Looks great. :)
I thought this one was much funnier then the first. I love the freakish twists that you use like on the hangman part.
My favourite was the 2nd clip with the c.d I just love the the stapler came in for no reason, and im sure making the c.d spin took a long time.
On the third lesson I was really impressed at the way you showed the two clay men build the bed. It looked very realisitic and the end was even better.
Overall it's length was great, funny good soundtrack and everything came together nicely.
thanks yes I might be making a 3rd one because my skills improved a lot since I made this so watch out for more of these.
Pretty good greeting card.
It had the easy going, casual feel to it which easily suits the Christmas season.
When the snowflakes were falling though if you look closely you cant see a different shade of blue surrounding it. It wasn't that big of a deal but if your looking for something to improve on, fixing up that isn't a bad choice.
I guess the theme of this greeting card is everything coming together and falling into place during the holidays, atleast that's what I got out of it.
The music was very fitting, it set the tone early and made this more enjoyable. 2/5
I loved the music as well. The second I heard it I knew that would be the one I'd want for my flash.
Honestly, though, I didn't notice any different color when I looked at it. I viewed it closely and it looked fine to me.
I doubt I'd really do more to this flash, as I really want to work on a game that I will hopefully get the time to do in the future. I'll take you suggestions into account when (if) I work on it.
Thanks for your review!
A little sloppy but still good
For some reason I enjoyed watching them die, I guess that makes me a sick person...
What I thought was pretty cool is how you cleaned up after each lesson it kinda added the effect of what happens if you dont follow these lessons.
hmm, I never knew it was disrespectful to rest while carrying a coffin... but I guess the clay men took a little to far when they started to lay on top of it. hehehe.
Good work, fun to watch.
Lol thanks again but this was one of my early films that is why the animation is a bit sloppy.
thanks anyways glad you enjoyed it.
Excellent work!
I really enjoyed that, the quality was good and it was smooth.
It was funny, I liked how the red guy gave the the blue guy $100 for the car... I dunno it was just a good idea, added that extra touch.
The intro was a great idea also usually claymations just a have a basic pre-loader and then it begins but you just put a little extra into it.
Overall it was way above average. 4/5.
Huh well thanks for the review im glad you liked it the preloader was made by a friend of mine.
A nice fast paced short.
Not your best work but good nonetheless.
The subtitles was a great idea because in the original touchtone genius the guy talked so damn fast it's hard to understand the words but the subtitles made it much easier.
I like the way you made the clock on the characters faces grow when they sang louder, kinda confused me because I dont know if ... ya im confused now are the little clocks supposed to be the face the eyes or the mouth... or it really doesnt matter.
Anyway thats all 10 of your submissions i've reviewed and I have honestly enjoyed them all please keep up the great work. ^_^
The Clockface is the eye/face, the little arrow means they're talking (if applicable.)
It's just so god damn good.
It's too bad you lost interest in this series, im dying to see a fight between Link and Tails, the samus game was pretty funny to, "but i could roll into a ball anyway". : )
Anyway great work with the sprites (again), I just love the zelda soundtracks you used brings back so many memories. =)
Thanks for taking the time and effort for these two episodes, i'll be sure to come back and watch these.
Working on any other projects?
Would you believe those weren't soundtracks, but MIDI's?
No project right now.
Thats some creative thinking you got there.
The whole concept was interesting, reminded me of a video game when it tells you the entire storyboard. (that's a compliment)
This specific flash didn't have the same humourous edge your other animations have but it was still a little funny.
Great soundtracks as always, forgot to mention that in my other reviews.
Im too tired to go review your other two flashes tonight but i'll get to them first thing in the morning. Any great job... again. : )
This was my second flash actually, at this point I wasn't as funny as I could be I gues.
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