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[Rachel's rant]

Looks great.

The animation from the clips I saw were really detailed and the shading was pretty damn fine.

But just a thought for when you do make the final copy just do as much detail as you can in the backgrounds, like you can have the most random storyline ever but if the flash at least "looks" nice then it's almost always going to have a good score.

Anyway the trailer as a flash itself wasn't very good but I'm really looking forward to the finished version whenever you get it finished. =)

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

Heh, well, These were mostly just tests. I am making a full movie of the Malia thing, only much more detailed and... zenny... ( zen. nny. )
Update soon probably. I dunno : |

Well, thanks for teh reveiw. n_n

-GKG

[BVC]

Sweet ^_^

I really liked this, there was amazing artowrk and detail in the backgrounds which really impressed me, the music suited it PERFECTLY and it really enhanced the tone of your flash.

The fight scenes were alright, and I specificly liked it when the guy through the knife into the other guys head. (if you understand what I'm talking about).

Anyway overall I enjoyed this and I'll be sure to review your sequel whenever you finish it. 4/5.

willdot responds:

Thanks, knifes in heads are always a laugh!

[RC: Clockmas]

Best yet.

Loved the intro. Like the 2oth century fox thing. =)
The shading looked really nifty and I liked the detail you put in the background buildings and just those little things that make this great.

The narrator kinda bored me thouh since I could only understand half of what he was saying. Please add subtitles next time.

Anyway the parts I did understand were pretty funny and overall this is my favourite from you so far. 4/5

RiotGearClock responds:

Glad to hear it. I had to rush at the end to get it in on time. (I really need to work on time management. lol) Anywho, thanks for the review.

[RC: Big Brother]

Your submissions kick ass!

This had a weird feeling to it hard to describe but you really made the locked in, brainwashing, insane, kind of feeling, and it worked well.

The sound was perfect. It really set the tone immediately and I loved the "Sit Down And Shut Up" signs.

However I'm a little confused, but still great work again. =)

RiotGearClock responds:

Its based off apple's 1984 commercial which is (in some way) based off George Orwell's book 1984. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Problem with the tank]

Hehe good stuff

This was more of a stupid funny but I really enjoyed this.

One thing:
When I was reading the opening/intro those two white lines that were moving to make the flash seem old and historical also distracted me a bit, making it much harder to read.

That's about it good work on this.

RiotGearClock responds:

Back when I made this it was kinda just my attempt to get something on the portal. lol

[Super Mario Problem]

It's alright.

I think a little more detail would benefit you greatly, yanno like some of that frilly carp.
It was a little boring just watching bowser just stand there as the text did the talking so maybe some different poses would create more interest.

The Numa Numa was pretty good, I cracked a smile but didn't find it hilarious since t's overused but I liked is anyway.

Best of luck to you, keep improving and I'll be sure to review your sequel. 2/5. =)

In-Style-Always responds:

well at least you made a good and helpful review. well i like the numa numa song (but i might not use it in the sequel). i look foreward to your review man.

[-Valentines Day Failure-]

Not bad

Quick, simple and to the point. It was good.

Getting kicked in the jewels is always a funny gag and will always be funny, good choice. But just a thought if you want to say add the little extra touch just have the guy yell "EEP" or something as he gets kicked... then kinda like shivers on the ground.
Or that's just my opinion but if your looking for feedback yanno?

Anyway I laughed, I enjoyed, I'll give you a good score. Good job. =)

[C-19 Part1]

Couldn't understand the storyline

Not really impressed but it did look good.

The background was nice and detailed and the soundtrack really set the tone well and enhanced the feeling.

Needs subtitles. I might as well of turned off my speakers because I had no clue what was being said, those clock voices all sound the same to me. So it was difficult for me to become interested because everything was confusing.

Overall if I was able to understand you would have gotten a much higher score so I think subtitles are the best way to go but that's your choice.

RiotGearClock responds:

Wow, shocked this is still getting reviews. Anyways, the comment about subtitles has been noted and they have been included in all my newer movies. This one was done back in April which is part of the reason for the lack of quality. Thanks for your time, comrade.