Am I too late for valentines day?
Haha! Simple, funny oh and FUN! =P
But seriously I thought thus was pretty damn good, like half of all the valentines submissions were like 8 second clips but this, THIS actually had a bit of length, a storyline yanno?
Suggestion:
Instead of having what the characters say appear in text mixed with the background which makes it difficult to read. How about making some space at the top (since it seemed empty up there) for some subtitles?
Like try to fill the window completely with something moving. To me (FOR EXAMPLE) even if the artwork is shit, the music is fucked up, as long as things are constantly happening it's difficult to be too critical in a specific area since as soon as the audience notices something is wrong it's hard to forget.
How that affects your flash is for a good portion it was just mario and peach standing there talking, nothing else really happening and just before peach gave mario the piggyback I remember I was thinking to myself "come on do something, don't stay like this".
I'm not trying to be too critical just helpful and I'm sure you'd like to know what the audience will think of your flash as your making it yanno?
"Luigi was here" lol ^_^
Anyway good work on this, keep making flash, keep improving. 3/5.