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[Lock shoots glock]

Heh

I'm not sure exactly why I'm reviewing this but I've already watched it so I might aswell. =)

This is a nice tribute to Clock Day, yanno by calling the glocks fags and all. Anyway I'm sure you had alot of fun making this but I think it needs a sequel for Clock Day 06.

Nice song btw.

Charged responds:

Dear Major_punk, Thank you very much for your review. I did indeed have alot of fun making this flash submission. I'm pleased to inform you that there will be another submission this year, perhaps with you as a character - who knows. Add me to your favourite authors so you get an e-mail on clock day reminding you of my latest submission :)

[Super Mario Killing Spree]

What? No blood?!?!? ^_~

Good work Casualty! This was great. =)

I've always enjoyed mindless killing spree kind of animations and you did an excellent job on this one, this had some great sound effects and the music was clear and really set the tempo of this entire sprite animation.

I think this would of been a little better if it had some more intense action though. Like personally I like it when the main character is fighting like a dozen enemies at once and it's just insane to watch with all the crazy shit that happens.
But in this it was fast but usually Mario was only fighting one guy at a time, especially while Mario was driving the tank. I think you could've added some more enemies while he was moving along like maybe have some koopa's jump on the back of the tank and Mario shakes them off by jumping or something, just the little things.
Or when Mario throws the guy into the air and you later see him in the far distant background and it shows him dissapear with a sweet *ting* sound. It's a cool effect and all but maybe instead of having the audience wait for him to leave have the enemies come in sooner, maybe?
I'm not saying this was slow or boring but I think it could've been a little better if it had more intensity with more actions happening at once.

There was alot of cool attacks Mario did that I was really impressed by, like when Mario grabs the gun goes into the middle and just does a bunch of backflips while shooting everyone. ^_^

Anyway overall I thought this really good, cool attacks, a few funny moments like "pwnage-mode activated" and some creative stunts. But maybe not as action packed as I would of liked personally. 4/5.

btw congrats on entering the Mario Parodies.

Casualty responds:

Thanks! I know I have problems with making "fluid" flash movies... I always have a little idea on what's going to happen next, but I focus on that idea and then I forget to add other stuff... AND I'm lazy as fuck. Thanks for telling, I'll try to work on it for the next time.
Thanks for reviewing and the good comments, you're a great reviewer!

[Slash N' Littlewashu 01]

Hehe

I got a few good laughs from this, great choice of music as it makes the transition from happy, upbeat to deep inner pain, oh and the whole chatroom conversation was funny. Nicely done. =)

*Waits for episode 3*

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

How could this happen to me?

Thanks for the review.

03 shall be awesome, the series' best =)

[Slash N' Littlewashu 02]

Emotional...

I don't know how that poor guy can handle not having his dearest lover... the message was as clear as day.

This is turning into an epic series, I can't wait to find out what happens next. ;_;

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Oh I have the next one planned already. It's going to 1,000,000 times better and funnier than the first too.

I expect 'Slash N' Littlewashu 03' will go on to win 'Weekly User's Choice'

Stay tuned.

[Ron]

I Swear to live a sober life from now on.......

I LOVED IT!!! I was confuzzled most of the time.....but still.... I loved IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really......No joke..........would I lie to you.....Honestly............

Maxwell-FA responds:

thanks for the support.

[Aplehebbel 2]

This truly had EVERYTHING

There were so many good things put into this flash that made it all come together, and it just had that 'wtf is gonna happen next' kind of feeling that really grabbed interest and WOULD NOT LET GO.

VISUAL:
The drawings were far from perfect but still got the job done.
I like the way the skyscrapers made the unnoticable transition from ordinary buildings to a dragon type of animal and I was really impressed with that so bravo. ^_^

However during the majority of this flash the background was just a single shade and I really think if you wanted to go above and beyond adding a few different colours here and there would really benefit you.
Specificaly when the sheep is riding down the mountain, the mountain is just a plain grey colour and if you added some more jagged edges and some dark shaded areas I think that would look really cool and professional.
But ofcourse to do that would take hours upon hours of time so I could never expect that but it's just a thought I had...

SOUNDS:
The music set the tone early with the 'religious-like' chorus and from the first few seconds on I knew this would be a humourous/random type of flash.
Although if you really want to get deep into detail then like when the sheep was just floating in the sky for a few moments just adding a few faint wind sounds I think would be very effective in creating suspense etc while waiting for the sheep to fall, yanno?
The voice actor for the "QUIET PLEASE" scene did an excellent job aswell so give him a pat on the back.

Also I think adding a little *bleep* sound when the audience clicks the play and re-play button would be a nice addition.

HUMOUR:
The drawings themselves had a comical style so they lightened the mood and made this extremely easy to enjoy. But we both know the bannana following the sheep around was the funniest part of all, it consistantly came at the right times and just sounded hilarious. ^_^

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So overall I REALLY enjoyed this animation, the sheeps crazy adventure is just what I needed to brighten my day. Well done good sir! 5/5.

Duck-Duck-Sheep responds:

Oh wow thank you for this most awesome review ever ! And you had good ideas too, like the scene where the sheep is floating, a few wind noises would be better...yes, but i have problems finding sounds.

Also, the voiceactor was me ^^

Overall i can say that according to your review, you have excactly the same taste and let me just say that i made this movie for people like you ! Thank you for the review and i am glad that i brightened up your day !

[LL-The WTF? Collab]

WTF is right. ^_^

That was hilarious and I really fucking laughed hard at that.

Everything looked really nice, the shadings looked detailed and the facial expressions were perfect, the sound effects were dramatic and always added to the humour.

My personal favourite was femalelock in her "I'm cool" clip I was just waiting for something to snap the silence and was almost expecting a screamer so I'm already leaning back in my chair. It wasn't a screamer but still great. =)

Anyway I few good laughs from this, you guys show collab animations in a good light. Keep up the good work! 4/5.

Galloglasses responds:

=)
Another happy customer, it was Venus Lock btw, but I'm glad you liked this!
Thx for watching!

[Your Inner Carrot]

Too repetitive...

Again the same intro, come on do you really think it will have the same level of entertainment again? If you want that creative edge you need to do something creative, original, new!

Seriously lacks animation, actually there was zero animation. Just that same 'twitch' from the arrow of the carrotlock, personally I felt this was a chore to finish watching... I didn't want to listen to the end because it was the same speaktonia talking about carrots in a voice that I couldn't understand and subtitles is really necessary. To me this is a joke submission, hardly any effort put into this and just cut out pictures from your previous work.

"The Inner" series, has lost it's humour, Gone beyond the limit for me. The first few episodes I got a little chuckle from but the "new" episodes are just basically the same submission with a different title and theme.

Also when the speaktonia does finish talking about carrots the arrow above the carrot continues to twitch and is still on loop, I think you should at least end it and place a replay button somewhere because for the very few who continue to watch it to this point probibly won't be happy with how it just goes on and on and on and on...

So overall I'm annoyed with the series, not because your glocks but because it's just too damn repetitive and effortless. 0/5.

LollerCupcake responds:

HELLO MY NAME IS SALTYJELLOGLOCK AND IT IS MY MISSION TO PISS OFF THE MORONIC USERS OF NEWGROUNDS

THANK YOU FOR POINTING OUT THE OBVIOUS

ps
RELEASE YOUR INNER CARROT

[Your Inner Etnies]

Desperately needs movement

The intro is overused but I noticed you kinda shortened it and added some cool sound effects, which is good for your score.

The rest of the flash was just a 3 frame loop which obviously isn't exciting to watch, the graphics were nice and extremely detailed giving this a visual edge but from lack of animation this became boring very quickly.

Also since there is so much speaktonia used in this and specificaly this time it talked a bit faster then normal I think subtitles would be a good idea just to make this easier to understand and keep the interest...

I think adding a replay button would be a good idea too, not a big deal but a suggestion, and other then those things above this had all the bells and whistles but not enough real purpose. 1/5.

LollerCupcake responds:

RELEASE YOUR INNER ETNIES

[LL-blood brothers]

Meh...

This was alright, there were few good action scenes although not that impressive but had a fair bit of humour too. =)

The drawings were a bit sketchy and didn't have much detail so some shading would benefit you there however you did use convincing facial expressions especially while peanutbutterlock was playing his guitar and getting into the music, heh.

The Blood Brothers song you used was a perfect match for your flash because during the intro while Barbarianlock and peanutbutterlock were talking the music was playing it's intro and then when they started firing their machine guns the lyrics started so everything was in sync which gave this a cool effect.

In the first scene while PB-lock was fighting there was a white strip on the right hand side of the screen and again while they both were talking on the bottom and right side. Same white strip on the bottom during the credits too, you might wanna fix that up.

The credits messages were pretty funny I thought and the retard picture guy when he got stabbed so this animation did have humour but not that much.

Overall this was a good music video type flash, the violence was a little weak without wounds and blood, still interesting to watch though on the other hand a little short. 3/5.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

thanks! great feedback this is one of my longest reviews