Major-punk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Daily Short]

It's actually not that bad

I liked the music you used in the background, as soon as I heard that I knew this would be a funny type of flash.

The sound effect you used when the bunnies head got impaled with the stick was great, it added that extra touch to the humour.

This has been one of the better 10 second flash im ever gonna see and I found it wirth reviewing. I hope you find the motivation to make more flash (even if it's short). =)

Frostbreath responds:

The music is something i got from Flashkit, with the idea of it making the movie ''sound'' funny. Glad it worked.

I probably wont be continuing on these two projects that i've started on very soon, buti hope to submit them before this year end.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Halo 2: TSS ep.1]

Needs to be longer

It looked really good, great backgrounds and the players looked very realistic but it ended too soon.

I liked the way you made the players talk by having their heads kinda ...bounce... anyway it is much better then if you just had the head sit there and not move.

Anyway good luck getting into the Halo parodies section. =)

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Well you can help by submitting it to the collection. Thx for the kind comments.

[Belligerence]

That was so awesome!

I really liked the intro you used having the new reporters and such, it really set the stage and I thought it was just great.

The sprites were good, smooth and looked realistic.

To me the voice acting was really bad, it sounded like you had a cold or you were holding your nose shut or something...

Anyway I enjoyed it, great tribute.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Lol i didnt have a cold or held my nose. It's just poor voice editing. But thanks for the great feedback!

[Dim Sum Girl]

I like it

I love the anime style you used and once again you really have talent for drawings, they looked awesome.

The lip syncing was fairly good but not very detailed, it was funny I liked that part where the guy was peeking through the window while she was in the tub. XD

But I didn't like how it ended so quickly, it just seemed to soon I guess. : /

Bomee responds:

thankies for the review. if i have time, i'll see if i can do the rest :)

[Andrea's Heart]

Not bad

Great drawings and the same for the shading they were both done very well!, they really impressed me and I like the sytle you used like all poetic and deep.

The soundtrack set the tone right away and suited this flash perfectly.

Overall it was a good flash and I liked it, good work. =)

Bomee responds:

thankies, i think this one is my favorite of the four i have on newgrounds :) *bows*

[Life As a Dreamer]

Oh man that was weird

I think this was my favourite so far, I don't know why but I just had the urge to keep watching.

The vineyard part was very unique I don't think i've seen anything like that before, although I rarely watch claymations that part just "wowed" me.

The view from the paper airplane was really creative and interesting, that part especially went well with the music it reminded me of some old video game from the 90's for some reason but I just found that part cool.

The whole adventure of the blue ball was interesting as it travels across the world (~room~), running from vines, snakes and a big white glove.

Or atleast that's what I thought it was about. Anyway great job on your claymations and I hope you continue to make more, best of luck. 4/5

PiePie responds:

This was my favorite too, Im really glad you liked it.

Yes I will be making more as soon as I get some spare time.

Thanks again!

[Lessons in Life 2]

Looks great. :)

I thought this one was much funnier then the first. I love the freakish twists that you use like on the hangman part.

My favourite was the 2nd clip with the c.d I just love the the stapler came in for no reason, and im sure making the c.d spin took a long time.

On the third lesson I was really impressed at the way you showed the two clay men build the bed. It looked very realisitic and the end was even better.

Overall it's length was great, funny good soundtrack and everything came together nicely.

PiePie responds:

thanks yes I might be making a 3rd one because my skills improved a lot since I made this so watch out for more of these.

[intro v2]

Looks amazing!

Just from the intro/trailer I can see it's gonna be a great flash for the mafia, im really looking forward to seeing it complete
The voice actor did a very good job during his monologue and it really took command and grabbed the audience. (me)
The soundtrack was very fitting it had that suspenseful feel to it.

If theres something to improve on is that after the flash had finished and returned to the pre-loader the music still played. Also in a few scenes there was just a blank white background and I got the feel that was just from lazyness, so that hurt your score a little.

Overall is was great the drawings were detailed and it had the right style for a mafia flash.

[Holiday Greeting Card]

Pretty good greeting card.

It had the easy going, casual feel to it which easily suits the Christmas season.

When the snowflakes were falling though if you look closely you cant see a different shade of blue surrounding it. It wasn't that big of a deal but if your looking for something to improve on, fixing up that isn't a bad choice.

I guess the theme of this greeting card is everything coming together and falling into place during the holidays, atleast that's what I got out of it.

The music was very fitting, it set the tone early and made this more enjoyable. 2/5

EagleRock responds:

I loved the music as well. The second I heard it I knew that would be the one I'd want for my flash.

Honestly, though, I didn't notice any different color when I looked at it. I viewed it closely and it looked fine to me.

I doubt I'd really do more to this flash, as I really want to work on a game that I will hopefully get the time to do in the future. I'll take you suggestions into account when (if) I work on it.

Thanks for your review!

[Lessons In Life 1]

A little sloppy but still good

For some reason I enjoyed watching them die, I guess that makes me a sick person...

What I thought was pretty cool is how you cleaned up after each lesson it kinda added the effect of what happens if you dont follow these lessons.

hmm, I never knew it was disrespectful to rest while carrying a coffin... but I guess the clay men took a little to far when they started to lay on top of it. hehehe.

Good work, fun to watch.

PiePie responds:

Lol thanks again but this was one of my early films that is why the animation is a bit sloppy.

thanks anyways glad you enjoyed it.