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[Silent Movie]

It was alright, but I was hoping for better

I've seen that video a few times now so it's not really as fresh and funny as it used to be but you added some cool stuff to make it good. =)
I liked the little narration you added and the whole 'old fashioned' brown shade was a great idea.

But I'd to see a little more of your work, like maybe a little intro and it could start with in a deep voice "have you ever wanted... to hit Bill Gates... with a PIE!?!?!" and then show the video and maybe a few extra interactive things like dress up and assasin Mr. Gates, yanno?
Anyway just a few suggestions, good work on this though. ^_^

[Gost Trek SE: Basketball]

Not my kind of humour...

The introduction was really nice, but I've seen it so many times and it's just too repetitive for me to be impressed with anymore so maybe something a little more fesh next time, maybe?

I thought the little... votrex portal thing looked cool and with the music was pretty damn nice but no offense theres not much else I can compliment you on, everything else was just effortless and rushed..

Starberry responds:

now it might not be my best effort but it wasn't really rushed.

i really wasn't looking to do too much with this one!

[FF VI - Aftermath II]

Needs something more...

This one was much funnier and relaxed then the first, but I didn't think it was any better...

It wasn't much different then the first, just click to continue and read the text with very little action. You need more sound effects like when Rayne snatched Locke from the desert that would of been a great time to add a little godzilla noise yanno?

Anyway the animation was a little sketchy but not that bad, the humour was welcome and the storyline is still interesting but we want something different... something to set the 3rd apart from the previous two. 3/5.

Blahblahboy responds:

Thanks, I know I messed up the sounds (as well as the sprites). As for setting the 3rd one apart from the other two, just wait and see and you'll (hopefully) not be dissappointed.

[FF VI - Aftermath I]

Decent

I liked this, the music was great and really brought back some good memories. ^_^

About the text subtitles things at the bottom (whatever it's called)...
It's good to be able to read at your own speed and not feel rushed so you can really gather all the info but I think it would be beneficial to just make the button that your supposed to click a fair bit larger.

Or instead of having to click to continue what about changing it to pushing the spacebar because I didn't like the whole idea of having to hold my arm out over the mouse the entire animation...

It was interesting to read but needs more movement and less of standing and talking to yourself, yanno?

Good work overall, not the very exciting but as long as your patient you'll enjoy what this has to offer. 3/5 =)
... now to review the sequel...

Blahblahboy responds:

Yeah I know what you mean about more action. It might have been a mistake but I wanted to get the basics of what's going on but part III as I've said before will have less talking and more fighting/adventure. Thanks for reviewing.

[(001) The n00b Collab]

Looks great.

All the drawings were very well done and had that comic style that I thought was pretty cool.

When I hover my mouse over all the buttons they usually light up but it doesn't work for VigorousJammer's button, not a big deal but just letting you know.

Anyway some good video game music you used and an overall good collab flash. 3/5. ^_^

[A boys Life]

A fun short

First of all the scenery looked really nice, there was so much detail and effort into it. I'm impressed nice work on that area. =)
But the walking animation really stuck out, it wasn't very smooth and seemed to twitch a bit.

Heh, I liked how he just randomly got hit by a car, gave me a big grin. Anyway nice work and I hope to review all your flash soon! 3/5

[It was the world]

Great song!

I thought this was pretty interesting and unique, the always changing camera angles was cool and the voice acting was superb.

Although the drawings weren't very good it still had that style but if you want a better score you need to put in more detail and add some basic shading.

The song was pretty funny and having picture float by on strings was fairly creative but it still felt like it was missing something, like maybe if you reversed the camera angle for just a split second showing the ... 'giant grey thing' with like a *wtf!?* expression or something just to add some diversity yanno?

Anyway catchy tune and I enjoyed watching and reviewing this, good work man. 3/5. ^_^

RedHotPoker responds:

Thank you an your comments have been taken into consideration for future projects.

[The Powerpuff Clocks]

Awesome parody!

That was really fucking funny and the animation was so smooth and the backgrounds were incredibely detailed.... nothing but praise from me. ^_^

However I do think the narrator at the very beginning should of had subititles aswell since I had some trouble understanding what he was saying, yanno?

Anyway the storyline was just genious like it parodied the PPG perfectly. And the music was great too since it was so upbeat and helped set the mood.

Great work on this overall, a hilarious clock animation. 5/5. =)

[zaaasfd IV: hellspawn]

Is that all?

You and your friends kind of 'humour' is on a completely different level.

I couldn't understand what was being said at all, there was no movement and it just wasn't funny. With the same camera angle and no animation I am surprised this has the score that it has now, you must hae some pretty nice friends.
Next time I'd like to see some backgrounds, some subtitles and some effort. Come on...

retr0smash responds:

so this one guy walks into a bar and sees a camel and the camel is all like 'dfkdjf' and the guy is all 'dlwoidufdk'

[fall 9]

LOL

I loved this, although the drawings weren't all that good and the animation was a little sketchy it was really fucking funny.

The whole time I was watching this I had a big grin because I knew, I just knew something hilarious was gonna happen and the suspense was awesome. ^_^

The end delivered perfectly, and just the simplistic humour humour I thought was just... exactly what I wanted. Great work man I really enjoyed this alot! 4/5. =)

dumbpunkb responds:

thanks, but did you find the easter egg?