Score: 10

"*Wipes tear*"

submission: iwp makes ANOTHER movie

date: March 13, 2006

Hurray! Another submission from RupeeClock! ^_^

I thought this was hilarious, like the whole time I was watching this I had a big grin on my face because of how accurate that really is.

Anyway great graphics and detail as usual along with some good catchy music at the beginning and end. *edn*
Great work again Best of luck!v 5/5.

Score: 8

"A good demo..."

submission: the big ferrety tut (demo

date: March 13, 2006

If this is the demo I can't wait to see what it's gonna look like when it's finished!
7 pages of explainations and then a few extra features made this all look great, this here could be the 'all everything' tutorial.

Just a suggestion:
Show some pictures of what your talking about and a little more in depth.
For example when you were explaining how to make a button you wrote "create a movie clip and enter this code:" Maybe with a picture or a SHORT small animation in the corner showing a mouse going up to the top bar and clicking everything it has to it would also help the true beginners, yanno?

Anyway as I said before this is good as it is and because this is just the demo I am very impressed. I'll be sure to review it when it's finished and best of luck!

Score: 8

"Hilarious"

submission: PTFA Guy: St. Patty's Day

date: March 13, 2006

Everything looked so detailed and had so much effort put into it, the lip synching the drawings and the funny storyline. ^_^

However the animation seemed a little weak like when the guy turned off the stereo his elbow didn't bend at all and it seemed a little weird. Not a big deal but something I noticed...

Anyway a funny St Patricks Day tribute, great work with this overall I laughed a bit. 4/5.

Score: 6

"It was alright, but I was hoping for better"

submission: Silent Movie

date: March 13, 2006

I've seen that video a few times now so it's not really as fresh and funny as it used to be but you added some cool stuff to make it good. =)
I liked the little narration you added and the whole 'old fashioned' brown shade was a great idea.

But I'd to see a little more of your work, like maybe a little intro and it could start with in a deep voice "have you ever wanted... to hit Bill Gates... with a PIE!?!?!" and then show the video and maybe a few extra interactive things like dress up and assasin Mr. Gates, yanno?
Anyway just a few suggestions, good work on this though. ^_^

Score: 4

"Not my kind of humour..."

submission: Gost Trek SE: Basketball

date: March 12, 2006

The introduction was really nice, but I've seen it so many times and it's just too repetitive for me to be impressed with anymore so maybe something a little more fesh next time, maybe?

I thought the little... votrex portal thing looked cool and with the music was pretty damn nice but no offense theres not much else I can compliment you on, everything else was just effortless and rushed..

Score: 10

"Beautiful Denvish. ^_^"

submission: The NG e-Penis Calculator

date: March 12, 2006

The little slow motion twist you added to the class NG theme music was awesome, really creative.
The humour was great for the loading/waiting screen while your penis measurements were being prepared was just hilarious and the whole idea behind this flash left me with a big grin. :D

Anyway it all look neat and organized and a very immature theme brought this all together.
Great work again Denvish 5/5.

Score: 7

"hehe, this is pretty good"

submission: E-card for Dad

date: March 12, 2006

Awww what a nice gift... =P
It was a bit funny, like personally I liked the song. Did you do that yourself?... sounded like you did. ^_~

So the drawings were pretty poor and I thought you could've added some more colours but that's not really important.

Easy to click buttons and some quick fun interactive stuff, I hope your Dad enjoys this because I thought it was pretty cool. 3/5. ^_^

Score: 6

"Needs something more..."

submission: FF VI - Aftermath II

date: March 12, 2006

This one was much funnier and relaxed then the first, but I didn't think it was any better...

It wasn't much different then the first, just click to continue and read the text with very little action. You need more sound effects like when Rayne snatched Locke from the desert that would of been a great time to add a little godzilla noise yanno?

Anyway the animation was a little sketchy but not that bad, the humour was welcome and the storyline is still interesting but we want something different... something to set the 3rd apart from the previous two. 3/5.

Score: 6

"Decent"

submission: FF VI - Aftermath I

date: March 12, 2006

I liked this, the music was great and really brought back some good memories. ^_^

About the text subtitles things at the bottom (whatever it's called)...
It's good to be able to read at your own speed and not feel rushed so you can really gather all the info but I think it would be beneficial to just make the button that your supposed to click a fair bit larger.

Or instead of having to click to continue what about changing it to pushing the spacebar because I didn't like the whole idea of having to hold my arm out over the mouse the entire animation...

It was interesting to read but needs more movement and less of standing and talking to yourself, yanno?

Good work overall, not the very exciting but as long as your patient you'll enjoy what this has to offer. 3/5 =)
... now to review the sequel...

Score: 7

"Looks great."

submission: (001) The n00b Collab

date: March 12, 2006

All the drawings were very well done and had that comic style that I thought was pretty cool.

When I hover my mouse over all the buttons they usually light up but it doesn't work for VigorousJammer's button, not a big deal but just letting you know.

Anyway some good video game music you used and an overall good collab flash. 3/5. ^_^