Score: 5

"I Swear to live a sober life from now on......."

submission: Ron

date: April 8, 2006

I LOVED IT!!! I was confuzzled most of the time.....but still.... I loved IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really......No joke..........would I lie to you.....Honestly............

Score: 1

"It's a good start but......"

submission: Better Mario Z

date: April 8, 2006

What I would do to make this better is to have it more distinguishable between the two characters.....I don't care if you put a birthday hat on one....I was just not sure who was who...
The graphics were alright and the music was good. Maybe some slow-mo action scenes would enhance it..... Good luck on your future flashes.

Score: 10

"This truly had EVERYTHING"

submission: Aplehebbel 2

date: April 1, 2006

There were so many good things put into this flash that made it all come together, and it just had that 'wtf is gonna happen next' kind of feeling that really grabbed interest and WOULD NOT LET GO.

VISUAL:
The drawings were far from perfect but still got the job done.
I like the way the skyscrapers made the unnoticable transition from ordinary buildings to a dragon type of animal and I was really impressed with that so bravo. ^_^

However during the majority of this flash the background was just a single shade and I really think if you wanted to go above and beyond adding a few different colours here and there would really benefit you.
Specificaly when the sheep is riding down the mountain, the mountain is just a plain grey colour and if you added some more jagged edges and some dark shaded areas I think that would look really cool and professional.
But ofcourse to do that would take hours upon hours of time so I could never expect that but it's just a thought I had...

SOUNDS:
The music set the tone early with the 'religious-like' chorus and from the first few seconds on I knew this would be a humourous/random type of flash.
Although if you really want to get deep into detail then like when the sheep was just floating in the sky for a few moments just adding a few faint wind sounds I think would be very effective in creating suspense etc while waiting for the sheep to fall, yanno?
The voice actor for the "QUIET PLEASE" scene did an excellent job aswell so give him a pat on the back.

Also I think adding a little *bleep* sound when the audience clicks the play and re-play button would be a nice addition.

HUMOUR:
The drawings themselves had a comical style so they lightened the mood and made this extremely easy to enjoy. But we both know the bannana following the sheep around was the funniest part of all, it consistantly came at the right times and just sounded hilarious. ^_^

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So overall I REALLY enjoyed this animation, the sheeps crazy adventure is just what I needed to brighten my day. Well done good sir! 5/5.

Score: 8

"WTF is right. ^_^"

submission: LL-The WTF? Collab

date: March 18, 2006

That was hilarious and I really fucking laughed hard at that.

Everything looked really nice, the shadings looked detailed and the facial expressions were perfect, the sound effects were dramatic and always added to the humour.

My personal favourite was femalelock in her "I'm cool" clip I was just waiting for something to snap the silence and was almost expecting a screamer so I'm already leaning back in my chair. It wasn't a screamer but still great. =)

Anyway I few good laughs from this, you guys show collab animations in a good light. Keep up the good work! 4/5.

Score: 9

"Excellent game!"

submission: Orbox B

date: March 17, 2006

First of all great filesize, I appreciate it!

Everything looked neat and organized overall, the main menu specificaly and it really gave a great first impression. The background with the stars combined with the *air pressure-like* sound effects gave this a cool futuristic feeling and there was alot of detail put into everything.

Just a suggestion:
Somewhere in a corner have a little timer so after someone beats the game the first time they can try to beat their own score or you could give them some sort of grade by how long it took them, yanno?

Another thing that could go with that is if someone is really, really stuck they could buy a 'hint' and that hint could cost some time and what that hint would do is light up the brick they are supposed to bounce of next?

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Anyway I had fun with this game, although I couldn't beat it because well I don't have the attention span (haha) but that's a good thing it shows this game is more then enough and an even more challenging to finish making the reward feel even better.

Great work again, I notice you have quite a few quality games here. I might go review them all soon. 5/5. ^_^

Score: 9

"Awesome GAME!"

submission: what the fack

date: March 17, 2006

Just one thing I think you should know that if you right click and press play during the game then suddenly twice as many milk bottles come at you which I got a good chuckle from but I just thought you should know about it. ^_^

Everything looked very professional with easy going music, large easy to click buttons and just the main menu layout looked visually appealing.

The "story" was pretty funny too and I almost enjoyed that as much as the game, you've got quite the creative mind, heh.

Anyway I thought this was a fun, simple remake of an already successful game so I give you a 4.

Score: 0

"Too repetitive..."

submission: Your Inner Carrot

date: March 16, 2006

Again the same intro, come on do you really think it will have the same level of entertainment again? If you want that creative edge you need to do something creative, original, new!

Seriously lacks animation, actually there was zero animation. Just that same 'twitch' from the arrow of the carrotlock, personally I felt this was a chore to finish watching... I didn't want to listen to the end because it was the same speaktonia talking about carrots in a voice that I couldn't understand and subtitles is really necessary. To me this is a joke submission, hardly any effort put into this and just cut out pictures from your previous work.

"The Inner" series, has lost it's humour, Gone beyond the limit for me. The first few episodes I got a little chuckle from but the "new" episodes are just basically the same submission with a different title and theme.

Also when the speaktonia does finish talking about carrots the arrow above the carrot continues to twitch and is still on loop, I think you should at least end it and place a replay button somewhere because for the very few who continue to watch it to this point probibly won't be happy with how it just goes on and on and on and on...

So overall I'm annoyed with the series, not because your glocks but because it's just too damn repetitive and effortless. 0/5.

Score: 2

"Desperately needs movement"

submission: Your Inner Etnies

date: March 16, 2006

The intro is overused but I noticed you kinda shortened it and added some cool sound effects, which is good for your score.

The rest of the flash was just a 3 frame loop which obviously isn't exciting to watch, the graphics were nice and extremely detailed giving this a visual edge but from lack of animation this became boring very quickly.

Also since there is so much speaktonia used in this and specificaly this time it talked a bit faster then normal I think subtitles would be a good idea just to make this easier to understand and keep the interest...

I think adding a replay button would be a good idea too, not a big deal but a suggestion, and other then those things above this had all the bells and whistles but not enough real purpose. 1/5.

Score: 6

"Meh..."

submission: LL-blood brothers

date: March 16, 2006

This was alright, there were few good action scenes although not that impressive but had a fair bit of humour too. =)

The drawings were a bit sketchy and didn't have much detail so some shading would benefit you there however you did use convincing facial expressions especially while peanutbutterlock was playing his guitar and getting into the music, heh.

The Blood Brothers song you used was a perfect match for your flash because during the intro while Barbarianlock and peanutbutterlock were talking the music was playing it's intro and then when they started firing their machine guns the lyrics started so everything was in sync which gave this a cool effect.

In the first scene while PB-lock was fighting there was a white strip on the right hand side of the screen and again while they both were talking on the bottom and right side. Same white strip on the bottom during the credits too, you might wanna fix that up.

The credits messages were pretty funny I thought and the retard picture guy when he got stabbed so this animation did have humour but not that much.

Overall this was a good music video type flash, the violence was a little weak without wounds and blood, still interesting to watch though on the other hand a little short. 3/5.

Score: 1

"Not my kind of humour..."

submission: Sock Assault

date: March 16, 2006

This isn't Clock Day anymore so I'm gonna have to review this like an ordinary submission...

I guess on the positive side:
The filesize was convienant and this was really to the point, no long intros and I'm glad you didn't take that over used clock day 2005 pre-loader since I personally am really sick of it. The strawberryclock cursor was pretty cool too and it looked like it took some effort. =D

Then it was just a dissapointment, two looped frames of purple swirls which I would only find remotely funny if I was really high or it was clock day when I'm in a cheery mood for all the submissions. There was some nice Kirby music along with it but it didn't really suit it, like I tried to think of a way it would work out like maybe SBC is going on an adventure through some vortex and I'm supposed to move him with my mouse in a cicular motion and use some imagination for enjoyment? Come on...

I know you this is just supposed to be a fun submission for clock day and good for a cheap laugh but I guess it's score has to fall eventually.